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Tuesday, 26 March 2019

WALT: NARRATE


                                          THE CAMPING TRIP

One evening a group of friends went into the forest. They were scared at first but they were fine. When they got into the forest they set up their tents for the night.1 hour goes by of them talking, playing on their phones and giggling.So April says i'm TIRED yawn“Good Night everyone” then the rest say” i'm TIRED to i'm going to sleep”.Then Yalini heared some bear noises then she screams and wakes everyone up. All of us thought she was trying to keep us awake then when we heard the noises we all screamed so loud we woke the whole town up and April fainted. But then Diya scammed through her bag 5 minutes later ….. I found some chocolate hopefully this wakes her up so Diya placed the chocolate cake in April's mouth she slowly chewed the cake then her eyes open…. Everybody says “ HALLELUJAH’’ shes alive.So 2 hours go past and we all fell asleep not even in our pyjamas and with our phones on our faces they were fast asleep. 

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